Lucy Gray

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Jakey - "Pine Barrens" (Single Version)

I was pretty lukewarm towards the previous Jakey single, but this is definitely a noticeable step up in quality. The songwriting on "Pine Barrens" is far better than his previous works, with more detail and a bigger focus on telling a narrative than something like "Moby Dick" (as fun as that song is). Even the singing here is a noticeable step up from "Not Dead Yet," which makes the scratchy, cheap-sounding pitch correction a bit disappointing. I'm not diametrically opposed to pitch correction, to be clear; more so, I just feel like it makes Jakey's upper register sound harsher and more strained than it should.

It's difficult to ignore the Joji comparison, especially with the sadboy R&B-pop aesthetic being so prominent and even those quiet, formant-shifted ad-libs around the two-minute mark, but make no mistake: this single does demonstrate a good amount of artist progression, and it makes me optimistic for Jakey's future works.


PRODUCTION: 70/100

PERFORMANCE: 70/100

PERSONALITY: 80/100

OVERALL: 73/100

tl;dr - Almost a great song, but a few technical issues take the song down a peg; still a great effort from Jakey.


Original Publication Info:
  • Location: Rate Your Music
  • Title: "Pleasantly surprised, but still leaves a bit to be desired."
  • Rating: 3/5 stars
  • Date: 28 November 2022

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